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It’s fantastic to be part of such a generous community!
Thank you so much to those who have readily agreed to review our marketing concept and give us some feedback. Duncan Dalzel-Job and I have created a new program to help people working from home create their perfect environment.
Duncan is an architect; I am an executive coach. Our combined work is an experiential learning journey where you get to design your own office and, along the way, practice critical skills that will help you thrive in 2022 and beyond.
Here’s the document we promised Ella Bernie, Lexi Radcliffe-Hart, Claire Moss, Nrinder, Tracey Rob Perera, Tim Walters, Ph.D.. We look forward to your feedback. Thank you!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GERwi3qVltBRbUddTRoRDWOcsEyLE9rK-0JuwB8DN-o/edit?usp=sharing
PS. If you are not tagged in this message but are keen to offer your opinion, we are happy to hear from you too.
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Thank you! Ella Bernie. Please download the doc in Word if you would like to add comments in the doc itself and track them so that we can clearly identify them. We cannot offer editing access to everyone, as we need to preserve the integrity of the original document to avoid comments stacking upon other comments.
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Hello, Ilaria!! I just read it all and find it super interesting. I have a question, is this an internal doc. or is this something you would directly send to customers?
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Hi Sara, thank you for taking the time to take a look and for your feedback. This is a first draft of the marketing material. A final version of this document, appropriately copyedited will become our brochure. For the moment it’s an internal doc but it has the ambition to go out in the world at a later stage.
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All right! I think it’s very clear, the way it’s written. The message is pristine and well explained.
Congratulations on the hard work!
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It was great to hear that your website iterations are going well Ilaria Vilkelis – apologies that I didn’t manage to feedback before but if you’d like any other reviews, do let me know!
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Thanks for sharing Ilaria, glad to help! I’ll have a look later on today and answer the questions from the doc 🙂
Tagging some of your lovely Catapult cohort who might be able to offer some feedback too! Sara Lopez, Elena Cobianu, Will Greig, Nick Norman, Tracey Rob Perera, Nico Rubino, Laura Thomas