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TPC Friends,
I’m going to start my once a week or once every two weeks posting on LinkedIn re: storytelling. Where have you found the most success?
a) Link out to a blog or personal site
b) Share an article with commentary up top
c) Post directly to LinkedInÂ
d) Anything else I’m missing?
Wondering what’s best algorithmically and for overall awareness. I really appreciate this group!
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Mitch Bradford posted in the group The Community
TPC Friends,
I finally launched my site, ”Brand Your Story Online”: http://www.brandyourstoryonline.com
I’d love your expert eyes on it + your feedback. I’m willing to take a look at your site and do a feedback for feedback trade as well.
Thanks for all the good energy and momentum we’ve built together. 4 weeks ago I had an unclear offer and no site. Now we’re live!
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Nice job Mitch Bradford. Can you make the video examples clickable videos, rather than screenshots? I wanted to see your work in action
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Thanks Ben Legg I gated the work samples on my ”Let’s Talk” page. I don’t know if that’s the right look long-term, but I’m trying to get potential clients to understand the ”Your Story Playbook” a bit before they jump into the videos. Here are the samples if you want to take a look:
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Thanks Mitch. I love your Directors Reel. Are you planning to create a video telling your own story too?
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Thanks Duncan Dalzel-Job! Glad to hear it’s working.
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Awesome. Thank you @mike
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It looks just like a power point, but I actually think this is not a bad think, might actually bring you a high conversion rate. As a User I want to click on the video but they are not clickable. I also would expect the final button to have a hover over effect so that I know it is clickable. And the instagram link at the top goes to squarespace, which I guess is the software you used to create the website, right?
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Nice catch! I’ll work on all of the above. Thank you Eike Post
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Mitch, I think a lot of us are looking for predictable ways of increasing revenue by outbound. Do you know how we could learn the salesleap method? I did not find much on youtube about the method. Is SalesLeap similar to ComX.io and salesprocess.io?
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Clear message and proposition, well done!
A few extra notes from my side, sorted by how important I think they are.
– Text-based content: is better to use text instead of images to present your content, making it crawlable and searchable. Similarly, you should use headings to tell search engines and social media how to render the previews of your website.
– Mobile friendly: because you’ve used images the page is not being properly displayed in mobile, this will be …
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I’m going to work on the clickable videos. The beauty of a MVP is you make lots of mistakes! I used images as I have more control over the design and font choices. Do you think Squarespace text inserts will let me get the design control I want. Thanks for your help Jesus Iniesta
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Hey Mitch. First words of wisdom: ’accept criticism as a gift’. Brave first move putting yourself out there. My critique is possibly harsh, but I want you to be the best you can, so hopefully this may help.
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Lets try again- damn I hate that return button! 1.) If you use Hollywood writer you must ensure your script is 100% perfect. You have used ’you’ instead of ’your’. 2.) the name is too long and even you got it wrong on this site. I would prefer this as a tag and you name as in MBStudios or Mitchfilming. 3.) If you are promoting yourself as an online brand guru your site needs to be slicker than slick. I think you would be better going with a standard wix template and have …
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Bugger! Hit that return again. If it were me, my focus would be more on your professional filming ability. I wouldn’t refer to my assets, but expand on my ability to produce professional quality promo videos using state of the art filming equipment. You have a very marketable and likeable face. I would want to see this on the opening page in the form of a video. ’Hi I’m Mitch, my expertise is in making your brand, company or product (not asset) shine on line. Why diminish your …
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GGGrrrr!! Did it again. I think the simpler the better. Your online video of you should be along the lines of: I’m your go-to man for promotional videos. If I can’t sell you my brand Mitch in the next 30 seconds then there is no point in hiring me. By the end of this commercial you should know: who I am, what I’m selling, why I’m the best, what it will do for you, and how investing in me will pay back 10 fold. It will immediately give them confidence in you. If you can gi…
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A bit late to the Hollywood party but congrats Mitch – getting something out there and open to feedback is an impressive feat. I like it – clean simple and explains well. Like others, I wanted to click on the videos. And I don’t see why you would have the other stuff on the other side of the CTA to click an appointment as I like to browse.
I really LOVE how you talk to your customer and their problem though. There is also more in the benefit for me of getting it scripted sh…
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Hi Mitch. I find I get as much LinkedIn love whether I post directly on LinkedIn (i.e. an article) or do a LinkedIn post with a link to elsewhere. Therefore I always do posts rather than articles these days. For the link I think to your own website is the best as that gives you SEO traffic, but Medium is good for the odd article as it is a fresh audience, and can also link to your own site for SEO.