Hey Sodeeq, this is a great first step and it’s wonderful to see how you’re working with Riyike too! I’d suggest that the more information about each of your services would be great to have ”below the fold” on your homepage so that users can get to know what you offer quickly. Once this, your blog and your contact us pages are in place then you’ll have the framework to launch with and build from. At a later date I’d love to see some testimonials too or a…

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Monsuru Sodeeq I think a picture of you and the mention that you are currently writing a book would be good additions!

I love the Flying Start concept and the clean clear approach you have with the single page site. The spots of colour along the side work really well (but watch the blue one because it cuts off when Flying Start comes in), but my favourite bit is the merging of creation, development, creation etc in the initial section.

Great website Conrad Young as we discussed in Catapult. I like the composition of the spacing now. One thing that is still missing for me is the CTA to ”learn more” above your fold – where it can take me to schedule a call/demo. Good way for you to capture your leads earlier on.

Conrad Young smart site! I like. However when I click on a face it takes me to social not to book a call. And then when I realised I could click learn more I also couldn’t straight away book a call. Also, do you need all three of you at that front end for new enquiries?

Hi Conrad Young. Your site looks great and is very slick and smooth to navigate. I think it communicates your services and ethos very clearly. I found that it didn’t open up an option to contact you when I clicked the faces or ”Schedule a call” at the bottom.

Hi Conrad Young – site still looks great! I like the clarity through simplicity. Know it’s still evolving as you had mentioned you were adding all your own links etc. I still prefer the mobile scrolling to desktop scrolling, possibly because it’s one column so it flows through each of you and therefore mirroring your service process? Great work either way

Great site Conrad, it is very professional, tells me very concisely what you do, and does what it says on the tin. ! However needs some tidying up..

The call to action is confusing, I tried to ”click on a face”, and all it did was present me with a set of icons, would be great to have a ”Hi I am …. what can I do for you ?” Together with a short bio and a message ”would you like to arrange a call, etc’.” after which I am presented with. a ca…

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The site is really well constructed and full of useful information (and great SEO juice I’m sure!) – but the bit that made me the happiest to see – your story, and the values you play by – such a great way to show it and I can see how you’re reflecting your brand style between socials and your site now – interconnected storytelling at its best!

Wow – great to see so many changes (and improvements) from your first site launch Nicola Twiston Davies, goes to show how websites are always an iterative process. Love seeing the testimonials on the homepage. This is a very personal preference but I like the copy above the fold (before you scroll) to be punchy and minimal. Where it tells me what the service is quicker and if I am interested then I will scroll to get more info.

Fab website @nicola. For me, and this is tiny, the home page and the logo are close and sometimes overlap on my window which just unsettled me! About page story is great but I did find myself wanting a little bit more detail on your background. But that might be personal preference.

Hi Nicola Twiston Davies – I love your site and your concept! I particularly like how the tone and design really show your personality and unique offer. One very small thing I noticed when scrolling through was that the first part feels very personal – it speaks to how you can help individuals. Seeing the quotes with logos directly underneath jarred with this slightly for me. I completely understand why you’d want to put those up front, but I wonder what difference it would m…

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Hi Nicola Twiston Davies – I love your story, site and concept too! Definitely shows your self brand. Similar to Laura – on the mobile site, the logo overlaps the top bar (fine on the web version). On the same line of thought as Natalie but depends on who your target is, wondering if you favour individuals over organisations or vice versa? For me as an individual it works but if I was looking in my previous role in corporate, it would not hit me straight away that team building is c…

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Hey Nicola Twiston Davies – really love this site. It’s got such a warm personality to it and flows really nicely. What website builder did you use for it? I’m personally a sucker for CTAs that have some zing. I wonder if there’s a way you could style ’book a free call’ to align with the character of your site?

hi Natalie, big fan of the simplicity of your site, it feels lovely. Mine is mainly formating – the alignment of the ’Consultancy’ and ’Capacity building’ plus the ’Case Study’ button don’t flow so well . Can you centre the button or perhaps give a background to the Consultancy and capacity building descriptions

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Hi Natalie! I agree with Nicola, I love the simplicity and clarity of your site, and your choice of colour, the orange plays beautifully on the white space and really speaks to potential and growth. that said I think you could do more with your birds in places to connect the different sections, not necessarily a full background as such but maybe just dropped in here and there to help the flow and connectivity. But that may just be me – I love birds 🙂

Never too late Natalie Tucker! One thing from me, if you can ”fix” the top menu so that when you scroll you can still access the menu points in a desktop browser. Really love the white space and clarity the site brings.